Monday, December 04, 2006

Bheed

Tanhaaiyon mein rehne ki aadat to nahi
Tanhaaiyon ko phir bhi hum sehte hain
Is bheed mein ye talaash mumkin to nahi
Phir bhi tumko dhoondte hum rehte hain

11 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

tu phir toondna baand kar do, woh khud par khud aap ke paas aa jayega

10:05 PM  
Blogger educatedunemployed said...

Oh well written all of you.Which reminds me didn't you write on a shayyari blog too? What happened to that??

1:51 AM  
Blogger jhantu said...

kahi aap ke saath "dhoondte hi rahe jaoge" na ho jaye!

4:24 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice:)

8:29 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sapne dekhne ki umeed mein hum kuch jyaada hi so gaye,
Tumko dhoondte dhoondte hum khud kho gaye.

yes i know it's lame but I got carried away by your sher-o-shaayari discussion here.
:P

3:41 PM  
Blogger Joyful Heart! said...

beautiful! came in here through M's blog. am coming back for more!

1:27 AM  
Blogger By Deepa and Supriya said...

Ha! Ha! now you have made a shayar out of all our your readers!

1:49 AM  
Blogger Casablanca said...

San,
Intezaar bhi to ek khoj hai...

Aris,
Un sapno ka kya karoge, jinke sach hone ki umeed na ho?

EU,
It stopped inspiring me.

Jhantu,
LOL. Good ol' Indian TV, and good ol' detergent advertisements :)

Duhita,
Thanks :)

Jupiter,
Poetry is almost always lame. That is why I like it ;)

Appu,
Too many times to remember.

Sapna,
Sure. We are a welcoming lot, my blog and me :)

Orchid,
Too bad I couldnt convert you though :)

5:08 PM  
Blogger San said...

wah wah wah *lifts left hand to do a salaam*

sab ke comments tariff ke yoog hain, dekha casa aap ke sangaanth mein saab shayar hogaye ;)

4:04 AM  
Blogger Casablanca said...

I just nudged the poet in everyone :)

9:42 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

and the right answer is.. Jupiter, your shaayari rocks out!

3:40 PM  

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